In this article the author tells about the ins and outs of
the “iGeneration”. He starts his tale
off with some personal experiences he encountered on a recent trip to New York. He claims that people nowadays tend to be
less socially intact and connected with the outside world. This he points out is partially due to iPods.
He does acknowledge that he also tends to listen to music himself and even
mildly criticize himself. The point is
made that iPods are extremely useful to have, but at the same time he questions
whether you have to have “those white wires” hanging from your ears at all
time. This is not simply a problem just
with iPods, it is also prominent in social media, blogs, and even news. The average person phases out what they
really don’t want to hear. The author
challenges his readers to try to go without the music for a while reasoning that
if you do you will soon pick up the subtle social queues that you have been
missing while “plugged in”. Overall the
author does a good job on showing the popularity and “evils” of iPods. He accents these by using his own personal
experiences. The point is furthered by
addressing and refuting possible counterpoints.
The author recognizes that as a whole iPods are good, but the main point
being made here is that when you are jamming out you are actually missing
out. This all goes into his final
point: As technology advances, you will
see an equal decline in the quality of our society.
Tyler, solid work here! Could you separate your claims into paragraphs to help your reader follow your argument?
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